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All right, if you can all listen up for a couple minutes, I've got some things you might be interested in hearing about--and I'm gonna need your input on them.
Since it sounded like people'd be interested in the possibility of having a nightclub here, we're gonna try putting something together on the second floor of Seventh Heaven. Dining, dancing, live music, the works. Opening night'll be sometime at the beginning of August, if everything goes according to plan.
What that means, though, is that we're gonna need some entertainment, and that's where you come in. If you're a musician and you've been wanting an audience, then you could have a regular gig here--any style music. I'm partial to pop, of course, but I get the feeling not everyone here likes Perry Como. Or maybe if you do standup--that could be okay, too. I don't want it turning into a whole vaudeville circuit up there, but if you're some other kind of entertainer, let me know, and we'll see if we can't fit you in somewhere.
So if you're interested, let me know here. Tell me what it you do, whether you're going to need anything there to perform, like if you play the piano, and how often we could count on you to be the evening's entertainment.
And if I haven't lost you all completely yet, if anyone's got an idea for a name for the place, I'm all ears. I name characters--turns out I'm no good at naming nightclubs.
[And with that task done, she's going to go celebrate this project getting off the ground--along with finally getting all her finished manuscripts in something approaching order that afternoon--with a trip out to Good Spirits. Can't neglect one part of Luceti's nightlife ("nightlife") for the other, after all. She'll be there for an hour or two, in a yellow cocktail dress, because it's just not fun to go out if you don't get a little dressed up.]
Since it sounded like people'd be interested in the possibility of having a nightclub here, we're gonna try putting something together on the second floor of Seventh Heaven. Dining, dancing, live music, the works. Opening night'll be sometime at the beginning of August, if everything goes according to plan.
What that means, though, is that we're gonna need some entertainment, and that's where you come in. If you're a musician and you've been wanting an audience, then you could have a regular gig here--any style music. I'm partial to pop, of course, but I get the feeling not everyone here likes Perry Como. Or maybe if you do standup--that could be okay, too. I don't want it turning into a whole vaudeville circuit up there, but if you're some other kind of entertainer, let me know, and we'll see if we can't fit you in somewhere.
So if you're interested, let me know here. Tell me what it you do, whether you're going to need anything there to perform, like if you play the piano, and how often we could count on you to be the evening's entertainment.
And if I haven't lost you all completely yet, if anyone's got an idea for a name for the place, I'm all ears. I name characters--turns out I'm no good at naming nightclubs.
[And with that task done, she's going to go celebrate this project getting off the ground--along with finally getting all her finished manuscripts in something approaching order that afternoon--with a trip out to Good Spirits. Can't neglect one part of Luceti's nightlife ("nightlife") for the other, after all. She'll be there for an hour or two, in a yellow cocktail dress, because it's just not fun to go out if you don't get a little dressed up.]
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Something like that'd be good. I've never been all that good at puns, but between all of us, we'll find something. Flying High can go on the list.
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You have any other good suggestions yet?
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They've all been better suggestions than I've come up with so far. Nothing's sounded like the absolute perfect choice, but I think any of 'em would be fine.
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[Otherwise you end with names like "Toothless".]
...So...how have you been, lately?
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I've been all right. Trying to decide if I've got enough stories written to justify publishing them, mostly--and accidentally walking into a gig as a nightclub manager, seems like. How've you been?
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[Really sort of terrible, actually. Thanks for asking.]
I've been...eh, alright. I've had better days, I guess.
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Just...homesick, I guess. And bad things seem to keep happening to my friends. [How many have been kidnapped in the last couple of weeks?]
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[There were a few. Winry, Ed, Lucy, Luke...but they already had homes. So...]
Y-you could always move in here. I-I mean, if you at all wanted to. And--I don't know. That you do. Just, uh...an idea. Which is totally okay if you aren't interested. You know.
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[She doesn't really sound scornful or anything, just...surprised. Hiccup wants her to live with him? The hole in his life can only be filled by a forty-two year old woman who leaves half-written stories all over the house?
...Hiccup, you are one weird kid.]
I mean, it's not that I'd be strictly opposed, I just can't see how it'd be all that much better than living on your own.
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...But yes, he is a weird kid.]
What do you mean? I mean, we always have a good time together. And I'm cooking way more food now than just for one person...i-it's...really okay if you don't want to. But...in my mind? It seems...like it would be...just. Nice. So...yeah. Consider the offer out there.
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But, you know, she learned it from her mother, so maybe now they're spiritually related. By the power of chicken carcasses.]
Well--I mean, if you really want me to...[The promise of non-sandwich food being cooked by someone not her while she works on other things is incredibly appealing, let's be honest.] I can't promise I'd make your house that much more interesting.
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Really? You would? Oh, I'm sure you will! It would...yeah. It'll be great, I'm sure of it.
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All right. Sure. [And there's a smile in her voice now, except--oh, wait.] Except--well, the thing is, I've sort of got a roommate. I don't want to leave him in the lurch.
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Oh, yeah? Who is it? I mean, as long as they're not, you know, the aforementioned axe murderer or they're not strongly opposed, they'd be welcome to come, too. I've got two empty rooms here, so...yeah.
[He trusts that Kay must not live with someone too crazy.]
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[Her voice grows slightly muffled as she turns away from the book.] Hey! Mildmay! Come out here a minute, wouldja? And bring your journal.
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Oh, uh. hey. There. Nice to, uh. Talk to you again.
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